MLP:FIM All Bottled Up

This episode was written by Joanna Lewis and Kristine Songco (who have been writing for the show since season five). The episode was storyboarded by Steve Lecoulliard and Kelli Bort.

This episode is not as good as the season premiere and definitely has its share of problems but it is not a bad episode just below par for the show.

The problem with this episode is simply that Trixie is not that well written here, and she feels out of character. While Trixie did first appear in my least favorite episode of the show (Boast Busters), I have grown to like her a lot. So it is disappointing how not well she is written here. She seems more like a plot device to make Starlight angry than really a real character. Also her obliviousness to doing anything wrong simply isn't believable, because it doesn't quite mesh with her previously set personality. However there is enough good humor in this story to keep this from being too distracting, and the idea of Trixie trying to learn real magic is a very good one that I hope they expand on in a more fulfilling episode in the future. Also Starlight remains very likable through this whole episode and also keeps a poorly written Trixie from ruining the episode.

The subplot however is near perfect. It is such a small story and doesn't need much time devoted to it. Therefore it works great as a subplot as it is given exactly as much time as the plot needs. It also has the best humor of the episode and the joke about the song number is fantastic. All the Mane Six are perfectly within character and joy to watch even if this is only a very brief subplot.

-Michael J. Ruhland